Tuesday, June 1, 2010

I am jose

I am an OIHS student.
I wonder how things work.
I hear rap,music.
I see my Mother face.
I want my own repair shop.
I am I am an OIHS student.
I pretend to be happy.
I see alot of cars.
I worry about my brother.
I cry went someone kill somebody.
I am an OIHS student.
I understan everyone wants education and a better life.
I say don't worry.
I dream of my repair shop.
I try to talk english.
I hope for the world.
I am an OIHS student.

5 comments:

  1. Wow Jose, you are SUCH a poet! I am so impressed. You have written two beautiful, thoughtful poems.

    Good job. I am happy I get to be your teacher again, I think we are going to have a lot of fun!

    Ms. Julie G.

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  2. I like your poem, Jose!

    - Ms. Katie

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  3. Nice poem Jose. I see that you feel, like and see many different things. I am like that too, well, sometimes. What are you going to repair at your repair shop?

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  4. Nice poem. and i have the same question as Nestor. What are you going to repair? Bicycles? Cars..?

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  5. Awesome!!!!!!

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